Your story really grasps how peaceful and magical it is when people and nature, specifically bees, come together. You discuss things in such a clear and intense way, it reminded me of my grandma and how much she was into nature too. You show bees in this marvelous, calm manner and how they rather move their heads up and down without making a sound, which is extremely spectacular. It makes you stop and really notice the little but big things we miss because we're always so caught up. At its most basic: your way of mixing old memories with what's happening now in your word is extremely touching and feels real. The reader is destined to learn that what they're reading isn't simply nice to look at--but it makes an impact deep inside. Thanks for giving us something so beautiful!