David Shipley
Jul 6, 2024

Reading this article was amazing! It might be hard to wrap your mind around it--but we can take comfort in knowing that experiences like stepping out of our comfort zones, even just once, stick with us the longest. The manner you showcased your discomfort in the greyhound races and casino while contrasting it with your leader's love for the location really hit home for me.

You described everything so well, making it easy for me to picture the whole scenario. And the little green building from the game? Genius! It's spectacular how you included some humor without overdoing it. Your story makes it clear—one may immerse themselves in the knowledge that these unique experiences are extremely important.

I can’t wait to see what else you have to write about. Please send more stories; they’re incredibly enjoyable to read🤍

David Shipley
David Shipley

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Fiction Writer 📚✨ | Crafting captivating tales of the future | 100% of my story's are written by me. 🤍

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