One clearly can envision being in the calm garden mentioned, with this piece making the grace of irises come to life. I went to that quiet place. When the writing discusses a stream flowing backwards to touch an old memory, almost inevitably, we see something extremely touching and bringing feelings to life; the way you mix the outdoors and feelings is extremely wonderful and worth praising.
As a fan of both art and poems, what you've written means a lot to me; thanks for putting out such a great and deep work. Keep sharing those great words to encourage us🤍